E-Portfolio Writing Term 1 - Camp Timeline

E-PORTFOLIO - Writing Term One - Camp Timeline

ACHIEVEMENT OBJECTIVES:

LEVEL 2

• I can write simple sentences correctly that make sense
• I can use different sentence starters
• I can edit my writing so that it makes sense

LEVEL 3

• I can use simple and compound sentences that are grammatically correct
• I can use a variety of sentence beginnings
• I can select  words that are appropriate to my topic and purpose

LEVEL 4

• I can use a variety of sentence beginnings, types and lengths for effect - simple, compound, complex
• I can use language that is appropriate to audience and purpose - expressive and specific

Go through your writing and highlight examples of the following sentences.

2x Simple sentences - YELLOW

2x Compound sentences - PINK - NOT AORAKI

Insert your writing here

Recreation and swimming

The next rotation was recreation and swimming.My favourite thing to do was mini golf because I was good at it and I play in real life. My next favourite activity was the pool because you could pop fat manus and pandas.There was a freezing cold spa.We also got to go on the monorail.It was scary at first but then I just did it and it was fun. The trampoline was really bouncy and I saw a lot of people doing front flips and back flips.